Friday, August 13, 2021

Memory Poem


Remember

Walking across the Nelson beach

Making indents in the sand

The cold water creeping up against your feet

Bright moon light beaming onto your body

Cold breezes whirling and whistling around you

That was Summer


For writing we are making a poetry anthology which is where we have to write several poems and put them onto a slide. For this poem we had to remember a time and write about it with adjectives.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Milan

    Hope everything is going well in your bubble? I missed you in the T1 google meet today.
    This is a great poem that you have created and I really enjoyed reading it. Well done Milan.
    I really like when you walk on the sand and it is crunchy on top and soft underneath. This is fun making indents in the sand.

    Well done, keep up the great work. I look forward to reading some more of your work while you are learning from home.

    Until next time

    Mrs Costello :)

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  2. Kia ora Milan
    You have described the scene on the Nelson beach vividly. I liked the use of the word indents and using whirling and whistling together. You must have great memories of Nelson and I am sure you will return there soon!

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