Friday, April 5, 2019

Brilliant Camp Recount

WALT: Write an interesting recount.





I enjoyed this activity because I knew what to write about.
To improve my work I need to use more time connectives.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Milan, it's Aimee from Totara 4 here

    I like how you told us all about the first day in the first paragraph. Mabye next time you could use different colour writing so we can read it better.
    After reading this I learnt that the Incline could carry 13 million tons.

    From Aimee 😍😍

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