Friday, May 14, 2021

Descriptive Writing

 

The scorching tropical sun beaming above me, my back burning while sunbathing on the shore. I decide to get up and have a walk on the waterfront making the cool breeze clash against me. I take a gulp of my ice cold cup of water, chills force down my body. Gliding through the deep blue ocean I feel fish rushing across my feet, it tickles.

For writing this week Miss Power showed T1 a piece of writing from one of her students a few years back. We had to do a descriptive piece based on the picture her old student had done. Here is my descriptive writing 

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