We have been doing practise persuasive pieces leading us to Easttle writing, we had to do 2 pieces of writing one about should children have homework and for the second one we got the choice out of should animals be in a circus or zoo.
Milan @ GMS
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Friday, October 29, 2021
Persuasive Writing
My first reason is it can have a big impact on people’s mental health and well being, some people have enough weight on their shoulders adding all of the hard maths equations and reading tasks will make them feel trapped and ruin their wellbeing.
My second reason is that I think that after school is for social lifes and people could have sports opportunities. Sometimes people won't be able to
make opportunities in their life for the sake of having to do homework.
School goes for 5 hours and 45 minutes, we learn maths, reading and writing. Homework can waste a lot of your free time when you already learn enough at school and online.
To sum up all of our reasons we think that children shouldn't have homework because it effects their wellbeing and after school is for social time. I hope you agree with us!
Friday, September 24, 2021
Friday, August 13, 2021
Memory Poem
Remember
Walking across the Nelson beach
Making indents in the sand
The cold water creeping up against your feet
Bright moon light beaming onto your body
Cold breezes whirling and whistling around you
That was Summer
For writing we are making a poetry anthology which is where we have to write several poems and put them onto a slide. For this poem we had to remember a time and write about it with adjectives.
Friday, August 6, 2021
Egg Drop
This morning Mrs Costello set us a task to make a device with different materials to help an egg drop and still stay in perfect condition. We had to be in groups of 3 or 4 and in my group was Indie, Nia and I, here are some photos
Friday, July 30, 2021
Haiku
Another poetry item we have done this term is a haiku, for this one Miss Power gave us the choice to do one on Winter or the Olympics and the other of our choice.
Limerick
For writing this term we are doing poetry, We had to write 2 limericks and after we had to put them on a google drawing and add pictures.
Friday, July 9, 2021
Matariki Poster
This was one of the create tasks for Matariki, this task we had to make a poster and write information on it about Matariki.
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